Monday, August 06, 2007

again

she sets her jaw
steels herself
against the storm

7 comments:

Gazelle said...

Storm? It's summertime, there are no storms.

Signed,

Dense Male

Gaz said...

Grip the staff
steel thyself to the tempest's blows
teeth the wind.

Anonymous said...

Almost a haiku - but it did bring a tear to my eye and fear that you are over-doing it.

Should Gaz be gripping his staff in public?

twin said...

Dad & gazelle.... morning giggles to you both.

And...

No dad....Gaz shouldn't be gripping his staff in public. That's my job.

Gaz said...

Zulu haiku structure is different from the Eastern discipline Dps and is well known and respected for it's florid emotional style as well as it's visual imageries.

Hamba gashle madala.

Anonymous said...

huh?

Anonymous said...

Yes, but in the Isle of Wight the haiku is almost unheard of.
More to the point NMM grabs your staff in public!!!!
The Herb State is very tolerant.