Monday, August 06, 2007

again

she sets her jaw
steels herself
against the storm

7 comments:

  1. Storm? It's summertime, there are no storms.

    Signed,

    Dense Male

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  2. Grip the staff
    steel thyself to the tempest's blows
    teeth the wind.

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  3. Almost a haiku - but it did bring a tear to my eye and fear that you are over-doing it.

    Should Gaz be gripping his staff in public?

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  4. Dad & gazelle.... morning giggles to you both.

    And...

    No dad....Gaz shouldn't be gripping his staff in public. That's my job.

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  5. Zulu haiku structure is different from the Eastern discipline Dps and is well known and respected for it's florid emotional style as well as it's visual imageries.

    Hamba gashle madala.

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  6. Yes, but in the Isle of Wight the haiku is almost unheard of.
    More to the point NMM grabs your staff in public!!!!
    The Herb State is very tolerant.

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